FALLING OUT OF CARS
My
early novels and stories were set in Manchester. When I left there,
moving to Brighton, I knew that it might take a while before I
could start writing again, in any serious way. There was a sense
of roots being pulled loose from the ground.
I started various projects, just messing about really, searching
for new inspirations. I had about fifty pages concerning a group
of teenage girls in Brighton, all of them hooked on playing chess.
It doesn't sound very exciting, to be sure. But there it was.
The main character was called Tupelo. A teenage girl of the same
name had turned up in a very early draft of Needle in the Groove.
I just liked the name, I suppose, it being the birth place of
Elvis Presley.
The novel reached a dead end. I tried various other plot ideas,
none of them offering the requisite buzz I need to keep writing.
I was now entering my usual period of worry, whenever a novel
refuses to reveals itself. These feelings were made worse by the
fact of the move to a new location. I didn't particularly want
to just start setting stories in Brighton. But where else could
I wrote about? I was stuck.
One of the other things I briefly looked at was the idea of Alice's
mirror. This comes from an old short story, "Latitude 52", originally
published in an anthology called Intoxication. I had deliberately
kept this work back from my collection, Pixel Juice, because the
central idea was just too powerful to be left as a short story.
It needed to be given another life, a second chance of being told.
The story imagined that the original mirror that Alice had travelled
though in Through the Looking Glass, had been smashed, and the
pieces scattered around the country. Over the years, various mad
collectors had tried to find them. They were treasured objects,
magical items offering a tiny glimpse into another world, a dreamworld.
I had always seen this story as being a good way to bring my Lewis
Carroll obsession up to date. So I spent a while trying to write
a new novel, using the broken mirror as a plot device. Unfortunately,
once again the idea came to nothing. |
There
was another little idea floating around. I can't remember exactly
where the notion of the rising noise levels came from. Perhaps
there was something in the paper about the amount of information
we have to process these days, just by walking down the street.
Or maybe I read something about Communication Theory. Basically,
the theory describes a pathway along which any message has to
pass, starting from a transmitting device, towards a receiver.
This pathway exists for any kind of communication, telephone lines,
semaphore signals, even two people talking to each other. Noise
is the name given to any kind of interference that affects a message
as it passes along the pathway. Static on a telephone line is
an obvious example. Snow on a video screen another. Even stumbling
over your words can be seen as noise. Something gets lost on the
way between transmitter and receiver.
Okay, let's do the big what if? What of the level of noise started
to rise, for some as yet unknown reason. How would that affect
communication systems? What if the noise became so pronounced
that hardly anything of a message could get through the system.
We couldn't read properly, we couldn't decode advertisements.
Perhaps it would reach a point where even talking face to face
with another person became impossible. The noise becomes a sickness,
affecting everything and everybody. How would that change society?
This is the typical process I might go through, just finding some
weird idea, and running with it, pushing it to the limits. But
at the moment it was only that, an idea and nothing more. I had
a single sentence that I liked, that I thought might well start
the novel off: 'If you can read this sentence, it means you're
alive.' That was all. It sounded like a message from the future,
a warning, a celebration, even. Also, it brought into play the
whole question of how a book could even be written in the days
of the sickness, wouldn't the noise infect the words being used
to tell the story? |
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I had the idea that looking into mirrors would be the worse thing
you could do, because the noise sickness would mutate your own
self image so much it would drive people mad. Maybe this idea
could be merged with that of the broken fragments of Alice's mirror?
This was exciting. There was definitely something about the idea,
it seemed to have a lot of potential. Trouble was, no story as
yet, no characters, no idea of what the book might feel like.
I spent a time trying different approaches, all leading nowhere.
Eventually, I decided that I needed some kind of meta-kick, a
very deliberate and chance-driven starting point. I decided to
go back to a series of notebooks I had used to document ideas,
many years before, when I first started writing in a serious manner.
I told myself that I would open the first of these notebooks at
the first page, and use the idea that was given there. And that
whatever this was, I would use it as the opening of the novel.
It seems a bit mad, I suppose. But nevertheless, this is what
I did. This first notebook was started about ten years ago, when
I was trying to become a playwright. So all the notes in it refer
to ideas for plays. Here's the first one. |
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Two men and a woman are resting in a hotel room, in some undisclosed
foreign land. The two men are soldiers. They are waiting for a
third soldier, their sergeant, to come back with some news. A
war had been fought a few years previously, with the British Army
involved. The three soldiers have come back to this country after
receiving news that the body of one of their fellow soldiers has
been found, after years of being "missing in action". The sergeant
has gone out to try and find the location of this body. I had
the idea that a lot of bizarre red tape would be involved. The
woman is a journalist. She's come along for the trip, to write
it up for a newspaper, as a human interest story. |
That
was it. I started to write. First of all I shifted the story back
to England. One character stayed a soldier, or in this case an
ex-soldier, John Peacock. The journalist became Marlene, the narrator
of the novel. The third character I changed into Tupelo, a teenage
girl that has somehow become involved in this. They're all waiting
for a fourth character, Henderson, to come back. What are they
doing? They're looking for the pieces of Alice's mirror. The noise
sickness is rising. I kept writing, and before I knew it Marlene
was having some kind of attack, suffering from too much noise,
and she passes out. End of chapter.
Wow. Not bad. I was writing, at the very least. What next? I turned
to the second idea in the notebook. I won't go into details of
that, but it lead to the chapter in the novel where Peacock kills
and swaps identities with Spender. I realised that this second
chapter actually took place before the first chapter, but I kept
it where it was for the moment. I now pushed on with the story,
with Marlene in the toilet, looking into the mirror. A really
crazy idea came to me then. Perhaps I could structure the book
so that alternate chapters moved forward and backward. The book
would start in the middle of the action (the hotel room) and then
show what happened before that, and then after that, and so on,
like a strange concertina effect. I had the idea that the last
two chapters of the book would reveal how the story started, and
how it all ends. It was of course an incredibly complex structure
for a novel. Nevertheless, I pressed on with it, and the chapters
that moved backwards naturally lead me to think of how they had
arrived at this hotel. The idea of the road trip came into being;
they were travelling around the country looking for the fragments
of glass from Alice's mirror. Funnily enough, the chess imagery
from the earlier incarnation of Tupelo didn't come into it until
quite late on; I had somehow or other forgotten that Through the
Looking Glass is a chess game! One of those strange coincidences
that always seem to happen, in the creative process. The last
element of the narrative to arrive was the idea that the characters
would travel through the non-spaces of Britain: the lay-bys, garage
forecourts, new towns, shopping centres, building sites, motorway
service stations, and the like. This is where Marlene and her
friends would get lost, not in the wide open spaces, but the gaps
between. |
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After
producing about 100 pages of this first draft, I showed it various
people, all of whom were more than a little confused by it,
especially the backwards and forwards structure. I looked it
over again, and decided to unravel the structure, as it were,
to push the story into chronological order. Once this was done,
I carried on writing it in a normal way, adding some chapters
to the beginning, and then moving on to do the final third of
the book. As the various drafts were written, I was determined
that the book would retain an element of mystery, that not everything
would be explained. This seemed important, in light of the subject
matter. The more that is explained, the less the sense of mystery.
It's a delicate balancing act.
I hope that people like the book. The noise is a rich subject,
and I believe, given the ways of the world, an important subject.
By Jeff Noon
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